What you get:

A detailed report summarizing the key strengths and areas for improvement in your manuscript, giving you a clear picture of where you stand, including:

• Constructive Critique: Insightful feedback on crucial elements like plot structure, character development, pacing, and dialogue, ensuring your story's foundation is rock solid. In addition to what you would get with the manuscript evaluation, you also receive:

  • Feedback on 38 story elements

  • A revision plan

  • Scene-by-scene analyses

  • Charts and graphs illustrating data on your novel

• Market Viability Analysis: An assessment of your manuscript’s potential in the current market, helping you understand how your story might be received by readers and publishers.

• Actionable Recommendations: Practical, tailored suggestions for improvement, enabling you to take the next steps in refining your manuscript.

• Detailed and specific feedback within your text: Extensive in-line comments throughout the manuscript 

• Encouragement and Support: Positive reinforcement highlighting your strengths as a writer, providing you with the confidence and motivation to continue your creative journey.

• A Coaching Call: The full developmental edit includes one free coaching call, in which we discuss your questions about the feedback, and next steps for moving forward. 

"With Angie’s help I was able to not only assess the quality of my writing, but also confront structural issues present in my work. Plot holes, payoffs, pacing, and more. Her helpful analysis made me more confident than ever in moving to the next stage of my novel.

Using the analytics she provided to me I have already set about building a reliable framework for future changes, and I have shifted a few pivotal scenes to different places in my work to better facilitate a strong narrative progression."  

–Cody C. Campbell